I need help with a homework

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So i need help with this homework the problem id is 3570 and im in class 101

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语法错误：

标题中：

  1. homework 为不可数名词 [ U ] ,无法加“a”
    So,标题应改为 I need help with some homework
    ,I need help with a lot of homework
    or I need help with lots of homework

正文中：

1.“So”与前文没有任何因果关系，应删去
2. i 应大写（做第一人称代词 I 时）
3.“I need help with these homework the problem”中，“this homework”违反了前文中提到的“homework 为不可数名词 [ U ]”，应改为“I need help with these homework the problem”
4.删改后的“I need help with this homework the problem”已经可以构成一个独立完整的句子，应加上句号“.”
5.加上句号后，“the problem”的首字母"t"应大写
6.删改后的“The problem id is 3570”中，所属关系不明，应改成“The problem’s id is 3570”or“The id of this problem is 3570”
7.删改后的“The problem’s id is 3570”已经可以构成一个独立完整的句子，应加上句号“.”
8.加上句号后，“and”应删去
9.“im”的首字母"i"应大写
10.“Im”语法不对，依照句意应该为“I’m”
So,正文应改为"So I need help with these homework.The problem’s id is 3570. I’m in class 101."

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